Kann mir jemand helfen bei einer Stellungsnahme auf Englisch?

Das Thema ist: "Children should not have their own computer or Internet access because it is too dangerous".

Ich bin wirklich nicht gut in Englisch und finde im Internet kein gutes beispiel.

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16.05.2020, 12:52

Mignon5 hat‘s auf den Punkt gebracht. Übrigens ist die Schule genau dafür da... dich etwas zu lehren, in dem du dich nicht oder noch nicht auskennst. Also nutz doch die Gelegenheit, um was zu lernen und setz dich dran! Oder willst du die Schule mit genau so schlechten Englischkenntnissen verlassen, wie du sie jetzt hast?!

Mach dir doch ein paar Gedanken, schreib den Text möglichst vereinfacht auf Deutsch (das solltest du ja wohl hinkriegen) und übersetze ihn dann auf Englisch.

Bei allen Wörtern, die du nicht kennst, kannst du leo.org oder andere Übersetzungsplattformen nutzen. Geht übrigens mittlerweile auch über Google, anders als vor ein paar Jahren. Dass der Text danach vermutlich nicht perfekt ist, ist klar aber das erwartet auch niemand.

Ein bisschen Arbeit wirst du leisten müssen, aber so ist das nunmal im Leben. Das wird nach der Schule nicht anders.

Gruß, B.

Woher ich das weiß:eigene Erfahrung

Hallo. Kann jemand bitte mal meine Englische Hausaufgabe korrigieren? Wäre echt nett. Liebe Grüße, und danke schon mal :)

Teenagers on streets 15-year-olds children will go out between 9pm and 6am. But should they be allowed to be on streets between 9pm and 6am? Some people say that children can go out between 9pm and 6am. They can meet her friends, have more freetime and they can d more with their friends, for example go to the cinema. However, other people disagree. One common reason is because they think the children shout be attacked. Another argument against 15-year-olds children should be on the streets at 9pm and 6am is, that the children could be robbed, or that the children have to little sleep. Or so children could be kidnapped for a man or so. In my opinion, it´s okay when 15-year-olds children go longer out at weekend. But all in all you can say it´s better when children stay at home between 9pm and 6am.

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Ich habe in Englisch das Thema "Piercings" bekommen und wollte wissen ob dieser Text gut ist oder verbessert gehört.

Piercings and tattoos are a major topic at these days.

Some people want to show rebellion others want to imitate their friends, but people also have them, because of their religions.

But you must always think about the consequences there might be, when you make a tattoo or piercing.

You might get an infection because of an unsterile needle or a nerve could get damaged.

Piercings and tattoos aren’t bad, sometimes they can help you to strengthen your self-confidence.

Later it could be hart to find a job, because some bosses don’t like people who wear piercings or have tattoos.

I think that people can do whatever they want with their bodies, they can do whatever makes them happy.

Others should accept the choices people make in their life and no one should discriminate them, just because they look different.

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Einen Comment schreiben (Globalisation)?

Ich muss einen Comment schreiben über folgendes Statement:

"Large global companies like Google or Apple should pay all of their taxes in the countries where they have their production."

Mir fallen hierzu keine Contra Argumente ein.

Ich bitte um Contra Argumente, danke!

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'Children should follow the family values of their parents.'?

Ich muss eine pro und Kontra Erörterung auf englisch schreiben. Sie sollte ca. 120 Wörter haben

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Ich muss in Englisch eine Erörterung über das Thema schreiben: School students should rate their teachers on the Internet. Ich weiß nicht wie ich anfangen soll?

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Englisch Kommentar?

Hallo

Kann wer mit den Satz in Deutsch erklären? Wir sollen ein Kommentar in English dafür schreiben. Aber ich versteh en Satz nicht mal.

"Advertising agencies should not be limited in their choice of pictures or language."

Danke schonmal im Voraus

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Hausaufgaben zum Thema "written discussion"?

Guten abend, ich muss als Hausaufgabe eine written discussion schreiben über das Thema "Should students not be allowed to have an own TV in their rooms?"
Wir müssen dagegen schreiben. Nun meine Frage: Kann mir jemand dabei helfen? Ich bin am Freitag neu in die Schule gekommen, deswegen kenne ich mich auch nicht aus. Wär echt nett, wenn mir geholfen wird.

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Wie schreibe ich eine Argumentation zu "Should parents monitor their children's internet usage?" Wie kann ich anfangen?

Hallo, wir haben in Englisch eine Hausaufgabe bekommen eine Argumentation zu schreiben zu der Frage parents should monitor the Internet usage of their children?

Und ich weiß nicht wie ich anfangen soll ich weiss ja nichtmal wie ich sowas auf Deutsch schreiben soll kann mir jemand ein Beispiel nennen?

Brauche es bis Freitag, Danke.

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Englisch - Kommentar kontrollieren?

Nowadays, many people believe that people have to start their own family, included a husband or a wife and children. But is that right? In the following comment, I will present my opinion of Will's attitude towards family life.

My first argument is that children enable parents to become grandparents. Otherwise it isn‘t possible to become a grandma or grandpa. If these grandchildren then also decide to breed, parents have the chance to become great-grandparents.

Besides that you share your whole life with one another. The other helps you in difficult life situations and is always available with advice and action. For example, you don't have to deal with problems alone because you always have someone who help and listen.

Above all you put your own flesh and blood into the world. Children are the only thing that has genes or DNA. You can see it grow up and how it becomes more and more independent. Children also give you a lot of love in return, which can also be expressed in the form of gratitude. For example, the children take care of them when the parents are older and can no longer do things independently.

In conclusion, I disagree with Will's statement. In my opinion, children are great and can make you very happy. I also think that a partnership or marriage strengthens a person because you always have someone by your side. All in all, I think that when starting a family there are only positive aspects.

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English argumentative wirting

Ich gehe zurzeit in die 9. Klasse eines Gymnasiums und ich habe eine 5 in Englisch. Daher würde ich mich sehr freuen wenn ihr mir bitte folgenden Text korrigieren würdet. Könntet ihr mir bitte folgenden Text korrigieren:

Today nearly every kid under 13 years has an own smartphone. But is that good for the kids? Some people say smartphones are good for kids and their developing. There are some people saying the kids should learn the technic of smartphones in young age for example to learn for their future job or for school. The childrens could learn in this age how impotant and useful the internet is for example they could learn for school by games and websites like togolino.de. Other people think the childrens in this age could learn for school in smartphones for example with apps. However tere are other people, thinking the comletly opposite. This people have the suspicion that the children could visit websites where they are still under age for example a child could go to a website for pornographic or violency things. The kids should not become an own smartphone because kids in this age should play outside with real friends and not with virtual friends in games for example a kid which is going outside to play is more social than a kid which is sitting all the day at home. When parents pay so much money for a smartphone the kid could lose it for example in sandpit. After looking at both sides I think there are mor disadvantages than advantages for having a smartphone under 13 years. That`s why children in this age should not have an own smartphone. In my opinion parents who buy a smartphone for a child are stupid and irresponsible because they damage the life of their own child.

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was ist der Unterschied zwischen should have und ought to have?

Wir haben das im Englisch Unterricht besprochen unserere Lehrerin hat das angeschrieben an die Tafel also z.B. could have, ought to have, should have etc. und hat die deutschen übersetzungen auch rangeschrieben.Aber bei should have und ought to heißt beides übersetzt : hätte ... sollen. Wo ist der Unterschied zwischen should have und ought to have ??

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Kann mir das jemand auf gutes Deutsch übersetzen?

People don´t cry because they´re weak, but because they have been strong for too long.

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Könnte jemand über meinen Essay drüber schauen?

         Every school should demand school uniform

In some countries all over the world school children have to wear uniforms the color scheme and style varies from school to school. In other countries pupils can wear to school what ever clothes they choose. In those countries it could be difficult to introduce school uniforms, because they are not traditionally used to wearing one. In the following essay I want to discuss the advantages to introduce school uniforms world wide.

In my opinion school uniforms ind schools are positive but negative too because not every student have the same style and they cant decide which school uniforms they wanted to wear.

School uniforms are on the one side good because a lot of children are victims of bullying because some of theme haven’t enough money to buy expensive and nice clothes. In this case the school uniform is very practically and maybe a good problem-solving.

On the other side pupils cant find our style and have to wear clothes that they don’t wanted. School uniforms can be nice but not every day ,It quickly becomes boring .However, there are people around the world for which it is too expensive ,always to buy a school uniform. Children grow fast and because of that they have to buy an again and again. We must take into account that the school uniform is maybe expensive but the clothes that the kids need for school is not cheaper and they have to be buy again and again, too.

On the other hand if the pupils wear school uniforms there is not a difference between rich and poor.

I have come to the conclusion that school uniforms are not everywhere positive and children should be able to develop their own style. Cause the bully is not reduced by a school uniform.

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"Man" auf Englisch?

bedeutet "man" auf Englisch "you"?

Man sollte Kindern helfen.

You should help children

Ist das so richtig?

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